Tuesday, October 4, 2011

My sentiments are easily bruised
Sometimes I know, often I don't
My throbbing silence testifies something is wrong

Maria Yousuf

6 comments:

  1. And I was left alone -
    My Insides were burning like sun.

    And I was Left Silenced -
    Every Tear Threw In A New Pain.

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  2. No. I randomly Wrote it. You've written great - I like the rhyme. :)

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  3. its a haikuuu...n it doesnt rhyme -_-....thnx though...and great lines

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  4. It just depends on the Pronunciation. You can't say that it won't rhyme the way I'll read it.

    I could rhyme with the "don't" and "wrong"

    You can read it too - it rhymes :P. No need to make that duck face.

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  5. Id say it was know n dont...anyway ... u r the one reading...thnx btw

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